In short, go read You're Beautiful When You Smile if you want a romance between teammates. school rivalry? This reads as an unnecessary set-up to ensure the two leads hate each other, but think about it - between your professional (future) career and job, and a petty middle school rivalry, which one is more important? Even if they are teenagers, I refuse to believe that they would be so insensible. But then on top of this, we have a rivalry between two middle schools and the FL and ML fight due to the. The story has a somewhat interesting, if unbelievable, premise - the FL replaces her brother, who has been utterly betrayed by his team, friends, and girlfriend, slandered and replaced by said ex-friend. more> author wanted to write a super cool story about a super OP ex-pro player coming back and being the under-dog, but has no idea how the game they're playing or the Esports world works (tbh I have no idea, but I bet it's closer to You're Beauitful than this) The descriptions of the games, so far, are similar to "Her fingers danced across the keyboard, her strategy superior to all, getting a penta-kill" There's no detail, and it just lacks believablility. A Slight Smile), but something similar to LoL (because they use terms like "jungler", "farming" etc.), so how, exactly, is one to get married? Marrying in the game? I don't think they're playing an MMORPG (or whatever they're called, e.g. Eh, I don't play games, and this feels like the author, too, doesn't play games.
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